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A Siren sings
for her sailor to come
to feed her dying need

She sits on a rock
coral in her hair
voice carrying out
over the waves
Hands reach
gripping for hope
but always
falling short

Her sailor sits
on his battered cot
a song eternally
in his head
One he heard
many years ago
when his shipmates
all fell dead

A Siren sings
but no sailors come
The Siren dies alone
©2005-2009 ~animeandraia
:iconanimeandraia:

Author's Comments

This is a follow up piece to The Last Ship to Come In. However, the poem does not require you to read the prose work at all. This is by far my favourite poem I wrote this year.

Yet again feel free to comment with compliment or criticism.

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:iconmaliciously-creative:
Poor Siren. She starved... or are they cannibals?

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The underpant gnomes stole my signature. If found, please rescue it!! T_T
:iconanimeandraia:
.... she starved...

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WoW owns my soul. =(
:iconcosmic-kath:
oh wow! i like this, coz now it's from the siren's perspective.
you amaze me, woman :heart:

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I'm just here for the masterpieces.
:iconanimeandraia:
:heart: Thank you for both your comments, luv.

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WoW owns my soul. =(
:iconzoutou:
<3

Just like the story, this is a beautiful piece. Exceptionally pretty~

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Slash Bandit: prowling around in your local supermarket.

PLZ TAEK MEIN SOUL?
:iconanimeandraia:
Thanks. :hug:

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WoW owns my soul. =(
:icongothic-rez:
Its so beautiful, makes meh want to cry! :teddy: *hugs teddy*

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"The melody of logic always plays the notes of truth" --Ayumu Narumi(Spiral)

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